Oh! doggie of disposition sweet!
Who shrunk your height and length I pray
by snipping away at your DNA?
Dachshund Daddy doesn't really like "truncated feet".
He would prefer to replace it with "gentle webbed feet". After a heated e-mail exchange, Grandpa peremptorily stated the following:
Which version do YOU like best? I can't decide.
How about 'delicate feet'?
ReplyDeletePS Adore the poem either way.
ReplyDelete"Truncated' feet seems a bit harsh. 'delicate feet' does have the right number of syllables..however, we think it's a good poem.
ReplyDeleteXXXOOO Daisy, Bella & Roxy
Max says gentle webbed feet :) but I like it either way! Have a happy today!
ReplyDeleteI like truncated feet! Delicate feet do not wiggle woggle. I would argue that no one snipped at your length though! :) x
ReplyDeleteWe love it just the way Grandpa wrote it! It shows he loves you very much Tootsie.
ReplyDeleteHugs,
Lily Belle & Muffin
Battle of the Poet and the critic.
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